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    April 14

    Free...At Last

    My exams are on so I am not posting anything new, just posting a poem of mine which I had posted long time back....I want comments from people who have not commented on this one...


    Free...At Last

    My life was nothing,
    But sheer enslavement,
    Even a free breath,
    Would be big achievement,
    Who was I a slave to?
    I myself don't know,
    I couldn’t find a way,
    Nor a place to go,
    I seemed to be free,
    I was tied by none.
    But yet I was a slave,
    To millions, not one,
    Now I’m chained,
    In this false city of relations,
    Everywhere I see,
    I just view new expectations,
    I try to break free,
    But all in vain,
    I have everything to lose,
    And nothing to gain,
    And then I’m bonded,
    In this world of materials,
    Where I’m the serf,
    And cravings are imperials,
    But then I’m even trapped,
    In my own edge of thought,
    I try to break free,
    But again I’m caught,
    I don't know where to run,
    I have no place to hide,
    No one cares for me,
    Nobody is by my side,
    Now everyone is sad,
    But I am in glee,
    Because six feet under,
    I feel I’m free…
    9:17:46 PM | Blog it | Poems

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    Born giftedwrote:
    oh ho wonderful flow here. excellent . YOU had me speeding along and then in the end when i was least expecting it you took the rug from under my feet. good masterpiece this.
    Feb. 12
    silas huangwrote:
    Everyone is the slave of oneself.If you have nothing to desire,then you will lose nothing.The opinion about oneself is most important.others is just a reflect of your mind.
    May 2
    Bhavi Patelwrote:
    oopsss yaarrrr..bau "Add" click karyu atle aavu thayu...actually dekhatu nathi ke add thase ke nai..so i pressed for 4 tymes..delete kari de je if u want..or else leave it..hehe
    ltzz
    Apr. 18
    Bhavi Patelwrote:
    hey preet
    howz goin?
    bau divas pachi yaad kari ne kai..hehe..how were ur exams?
    i liked ur poem too..quite interseting peice of work...post more:)!
    keep in touch
    LUv,
    BHaviii
    Apr. 18
    Bhavi Patelwrote:
    hey preet
    howz goin?
    ..how were ur exams?
    i liked ur poem too..quite interseting peice of work...post more:)!
    keep in touch
    LUv,
    BHaviii
    Apr. 18
    Bhavi Patelwrote:
    hey preet
    howz goin?
    bau divas pachi yaad kari ne kai..hehe..how were ur exams?
    i liked ur poem too..quite interseting peice of work...post more:)!
    keep in touch
    LUv,
    BHaviii
    Apr. 18
    Bhavi Patelwrote:
    hey preet
    howz goin?
    bau divas pachi yaad kari ne kai..hehe..how were ur exams?
    i liked ur poem too..quite interseting peice of work...post more:)!
    keep in touch
    LUv,
    BHaviii
    Apr. 18
    Abdullah Yousufwrote:
    hey there!
     
    gud that u finished your xams,have agreat time n have fun no worries,thanx for droppin ...
     
    Apr. 18
    pratima bhartiwrote:
    main achi hun dost.........aap kaise hain....bahut dinon baad yad kiya...
    Apr. 15

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